Title: KNOCKED OFF BALANCE
Genre: YA, Contemporary
Word Count: 50,000
Pitch
Ever
since a school shooting, security has been tight at Patrick Henry High School.
When SARA QUINN (16) gets into trouble for her dress-code-breaking T-shirt,
transfer student JAKE BARTELL, a gangly 16-year-old with mad juggling skills,
comes to her rescue, only to be punished for breaking the rules. Jake is a free
spirit who has just transferred into the school, but, Sara, having lost her
brother to a school shooting, is obsessed with safety. Jake is fine with
sensible rules, but believes fear has driven the high school to insane levels,
making school life intolerable. He has suffered his own loss (his father) and
thinks the town should “just get over it.”
He finds that his circus arts
--juggling, parkour (a stuntman discipline with Jackie Chan-like moves), and
tumbling -- is a good way to connect. Even Sara appreciates something fresh and
new, especially the beauty of contact juggling. She pushes him to put together
a troupe to perform at the annual school show, Illusion.
Despite the obstacles thrown
up by Dean of Boys FRANK BRADY and the taunts of BOBO, (17) a leader of the
school's risk takers -- who hates Illusion but loves circus arts -- Sara and
Jake pull together enough people to perform. Holding them together is another
matter.
First 250
words
Unicycles make people
laugh. They smile and clap their hands. They watch to see if you’ll fall.
That’s why I skipped
the cheese wagon and pedaled off for my first day at Patrick Henry High School.
I wanted to hear some cheers, and I wanted everyone to know when I arrived.
I needed the boost
after the crappy way the day had started. For the first time since third grade,
Mom made me pass wardrobe inspection. “It’s a new school, and they have
guidelines.”
Yeah. We’re not in
Baltimore anymore. Those Rocky Mountains? My first clue my friends were a
millions of miles away. And guidelines? Strictures. Orders. Commandments. There
had been a shooting at the school a year ago. National news. Now an inch-thick
book of rules covered everything from “Jokes and Appropriate Humor” to “Manner
of Dress.” Which is why I wore a plain red sweatshirt and jeans that had been
ironed. This was a compromise from the button-down shirt and khakis she wanted.
And marked me as a total loser.
So riding a unicycle
was plain survival.
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